Great melodies!
Great song!
The only thing I can suggest is that the drums are a bit too loud compared to the melodic tune. Just change that and this song is a winner!
Great melodies!
Great song!
The only thing I can suggest is that the drums are a bit too loud compared to the melodic tune. Just change that and this song is a winner!
lol, maybe I'll do a remix of this oldie one day. Depends. I'm gonna have to be really high.
Pretty good sounds, just not together (sometimes)
Yes, i have to agree about the beginning.
The middle part is pretty good - i like those cool sounds.
The main part of the some could have come in a little sooner for my liking, but that's ok...
I really dislike that pot banging noise by itslef at the beginning... it gets ok when combined with the other drums.
Prety good over all. Keep up the improvement!
Thanks for the compliments and advice! I shall try to mess around a bit more with getting sounds sounding like they belong where they are a bit more (ie. the pot banging sound [which actually was a really low low low HiHat >_< ]). And the improvement shall be kept up with (I hope) :-)
Interesting changes, could use better connection.
This song starts off simply, with an interesting melody twist a little in that ends abruptly. Connecting between sections could use more work. 2 Sections over-lap, a little off-beat, sounding kind of wierd. Towards the end, there is a peaceful melody that i like much better than the beginning. Overall, a mediocer song, it could be a lot better with more work. keep it up!
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Joined on 6/15/07